ROUGHCUT 2 Feedback (teacher and peers)

After viewing our second rough cut, we received feedback from peers. We found that people generally said they like the layout of the title sequence. They said they liked how we showed that there are 4 different characters. And how each had a different method of getting ready. Our teacher told us she likes the continuity of the scene and how we represented the characters (for example, the 'popular' kids are both wearing black with leather jackets while the 'geeks' are wearing superhero jumpers). 

However, at this point we still had to add the transitions which would make our title sequence seem more seamless and it would just flow better. Peers also commented on the fact that two characters are doing similar actions (closing the fridge and fixing their hair) if we edited in a match cut, the sequence would look better. 

Another thing we lacked was that we still have to add titles to our sequence. This will include the actors names and the producers/directors names. It will also include the most important, which is the film title. 

We also have no sound. This makes our title sequence seem longer than it actually is. We have a few tracks in mind which could work with our final edit, all we need to do is add it onto Final Cut Pro. 

 

Our final thing we need to do is to produce two different idents to place at the start of the sequence. This alerts the audience who the production and distribution companies are. 

These were all little changes that we can improve on within a couple hours, we are very close to having our final piece ready.