Roughcut Feedback from Target Audience

Overall we got really great feedback like:

Some said that they found it really good and liked how we sped or slowed things down like the bump between Bilal and Dilara shows the connection between them and slowing it down makes the audience focus on that more and shows that they have a relationship between each other.

They said they would of liked it more if Bilal's shot were more brighter when he's putting on his hat and jacket. However we still added them because we cut them to two bits one bit wasn't too dark and the other one just had his silhouette which was a different way of filming him so we decided to add it in anyway because we liked the effect.

They also liked how we used cross cutting between Martyna and Valerie and Valerie and Bilal which shows allows us to see the time and how they're all leaving at the same time apart from Dilara who is late.