Wednesday 4 March 2015

Blog Feedback 27th March

Things that I need to improve on: 

-Personalise the blog. Since starting it, we haven't really personalised it so people know its our own. We need to give the blog some personality so it is not basic and can attract people's attention. Sticking to something simple yet elegant really could work for our blog. 

-Post the draft storyboard that we intended to use for our title sequence. Then update with the one we actually used. 

-Post the pitch presentation we did, and with feedback. 


-At the moment, there is not enough evidence of planning and production on the blog. (The posts lack the right amount of detail to achieve a good grade). 

-Post more filming and editing shots. 

VIVIAN pitch feedback


CHARLIE pitch feed back


NAZMIN pitch feedback