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you have made considerable improvement with your blogging since the first health check which is impressive and you must be congratulated for this. However, there are still some gaps and work missing that is preventing you from attaining a higher mark at this stage. Please read through the comments below and complete the to do list at the bottom of the page:
strengths:
• some completed research and planning tasks
• evidence of research into similar texts
• evidence of planning
• improved blogging
less strong:
• no evidence of storyboard, drafting or production schedule
• not all pitch tasks are completed / posted to the blog
• presnatation affects clarity of the work – difficult to read due to background and font colour
• use of ICT could be greater
• time management and posting to the blog a bit haphazard
to do:
1. compelte and upload Storyboard as a matter of URGENCY
2. complete and upload production schedule as a mater of URGENCY
3. complete any outstanding pith task and post feedback
4. develop use of ICT to present work
5. reflect on and change the colours in the blog – brand it so it looks similar to your intended title sequence
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